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« Last post by dembia on February 27, 2011, 11:01:36 am »
Alright! It was a good story, though I predicted the ending about 60% through. The writing was mostly pretty nice and enjoyable to read, though some of the words were unfamiliar.
There are some features that result from a story being a short story. You don't get the opportunity to learn about the characters much. We start off with the two characters, and we only know a sentence or two about their past. People like to hear that stuff I guess, but I also like the fact that the story is able to quickly get to its point. But also, it sounds like the writer has the urge to be more "epic" ("O all you who receive gifts...". The metaphors that described the value of the the hair and the watch were really strong.
I did not know that the biblical story of the Magi is what started the idea of gift-giving at Christmas. That's good to know (see Biblical Magi on Wikipedia). It's interesting that the author chose Della's prized possession as her hair. Her hair will grow back so she'll have use for the combs, but the dude's watch is never coming back. He lost out in this one! =P